Peer Suggestions on Script

Open Other Group's Script as assigned

For this assignment, you will be making suggestions on another team's script. The script you will be reviewing is as follows:

• Team A (Natalie, Camden, AJ) reviews Team B

• Team B (Bella, Kris, Nino) reviews Team C

• Team C (Nunu, Victor, Star) reviews Team D

• Team D (Jackson, Nuutai, Evan) reviews Team A

Make 10 Suggestions

You as an individual need to make at least 10 different suggestions. Questions you can ask yourself as you are reviewing and commenting on their script: 

• Is the script using correct spelling and grammar? 

• Is the main point of the story clear? If not, what other information is needed?

• Are transitions between segments smooth and easy to follow?

• Is the tone appropriate for the topic (serious, light, urgent)?

• Is the language conversational, clear, and free of jargon?

• Is it written in a way that's easy for the anchor/reporter to say out loud?

• Are there tricky words, awkward phrasing, or tongue twisters that should be fixed?

Submit Link on Canvas

1. Copy the link to the script with your suggestions. and submit on Canvas.